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RedV
07-17-2002, 03:50 PM
This is a rough version of Autumn Leaves. I play the whole thing tapped on a 4 string Jazz. It's a little hard to hear in places, but just turn the volume up:)

I would appreciate criticism on the piece, not the actual playing(the playing's sloppy, but it's been a long day:)) ...things you would change, phrases you don't like..things like that.

Oh, and thanks to Michael Dimin for the arrangement(bassically.net)

Thanks guys.

Alex

AUTUMN LEAVES (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/red5_music.htm)

ZuluFunk
07-18-2002, 04:38 AM
I'd gladly tell you it sucks but I can't hear it.

When I click hifi or lofi it tell me I reached the end of the file.

keithconn
07-18-2002, 06:15 AM
Hey - sounded real good to me.

BigBohn
07-18-2002, 07:59 AM
Yes yes, a classic song Autumn Leaves, which is done by many many many bassists.... sounds okay. Suggestion: other than keep on practicing your 2 hand technique, work on timing and the tuning sounded a bit off to me. Other than that, it sounded okay.

RedV
07-18-2002, 09:33 AM
Thanks guys.

Zulu...not sure why you couldn't hear the file. I've had a few problems with that site, so who knows.

I don't know why, but everytime I try and record a bass direct, it gets that 'out of tune' feeling to it. I don't understand, but oh well:)

Appreciate the notes guys..guess I got some work to do:D

Alex