BassOrdinaire
08-30-2009, 08:31 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zeImyGPg0eg
What do you guys think? A couple parts (the faster runs) were a bit choppy, and intonation could use some work in higher positions, but I'm pretty satisfied.
All comments/feedbacks is really really appreciated.
monroe55
09-01-2009, 01:33 PM
That sounded cool to me. But seriously, get a hair cut.
BassOrdinaire
09-07-2009, 12:09 AM
That sounded cool to me. But seriously, get a hair cut.
I don't see how that second part is really relevant, but thanks. :hmm:
sawgydawg
09-07-2009, 12:43 AM
It's relevant when it distracts from the music. Had to minimize to listen to it. I had to say I liked it, more so because of the tone. But it had a great intro type feel too it. :-D
BassOrdinaire
09-07-2009, 12:22 PM
It's relevant when it distracts from the music. Had to minimize to listen to it. I had to say I liked it, more so because of the tone. But it had a great intro type feel too it. :-D
Music isn't a visual art. And I'd say a pretty large portion of male musicians have long hair. There's nothing wrong with it.
That being said, thank you for enjoying it.
bass349
09-07-2009, 12:57 PM
Ok, if you want some constructive criticism, two things kinds jumped out at me - time and language. Maybe working on the faster phrases where the time went a little wonky would be benificial. By language I mean to work on getting some more musical phrases under your fingers - best way to improve this i strongly believe is through transcription. Hope that helps, Good luck!
roccobladr
09-07-2009, 10:56 PM
sounds like the beginning of home by dream theater
sawgydawg
09-08-2009, 06:23 AM
Music isn't a visual art. And I'd say a pretty large portion of male musicians have long hair. There's nothing wrong with it.
That being said, thank you for enjoying it.
never say music isn't a visual art to the wrong college student/prof. they will rip you apart with avant garde reflexes.