It's pretty cool at first, a little sloppy in some places. There were some nice melodic ideas here and there, but it didn't really feel like a song, more like, noodling around with some nice melodic ideas. The last half was just silly, sounded like a bad guitar solo. Overall, it was neat, but I think you should work more on creating an interesting song, and less on playing really fast for no reason(that I could perceive)
You can definitely play well, but that's not always enough. Though, take what I say with a grain of salt, my songs are just as silly.
