| Sounds very good!
Nice groovy riff, a little dragging which needs it (positively meant) and the recordings sound very well too. Good drums and bass, sounds as a stable rytm section.
The vocals are not very distinctive during the couplet vs chorus, which could lead to a better result in the end, so the song is even more expressive than it is now. Personal taste says... 'not perfected yet'.
Guitar solo is IMHO weak and not functional in this part of the song. It's ok to place a 'quieter' part with more 'air' in it, but the solo has to carry this out and it doesn't.
Overall: 80% rating of what it can be. (Don't forget the first sentence I wrote, you wanted some feedback and criticism...?)
+ bandsound, groovyness and rythm section.
- guitar solo weak, a bit flat vocals.
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