Constructive Criticism?

[stewart8980]

Hey guys,

the video I'm posting is a 1.5 years old, but I'm going back over it again because I'm trying to make it flawless, and I just love this song.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nm06JuTIJ24

Any tips are appreciated. I'm gonna post a new recording this weekend hopefully, so I want to see what I should work on. Yes, I know I make funny faces.

PS- Interesting fact- I'm still using the same pair of strings as the ones in this video. Which I find absolutely disgusting. I'm also getting it set up with flats on Saturday which will be nice.

[OldDog52]

As a green beginner myself I'm unqualified to critique your technique other than to say that to me you sound pretty good playing what is a difficult bass line. I can bump this up for you though and maybe someone will chime in.

[FatAndy]

Difficult song,... criticism- a little uneven, not as legato as it could be.