Critique my composition!

chaseman · #1 09-12-2011, 01:08 PM

Hi guys,

I was messing around on Guitar Pro and my bass, and came up with a little funk riff that I expanded into a song. Please comment your thoughts/improvements on it. It's an instrumental, but I would consider adding vocals if it improved it. This is only work in progress. Enjoy!

Link: Funk Instrumental by Deadcarrot on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

TomA1234 · #2 09-12-2011, 01:23 PM

I think it is very good. I would suggest adding more emphasis on the muted notes, I didn't notice them first time I listened to it and they have a fairly strong role in the song.

chaseman · #3 09-12-2011, 01:33 PM

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Originally Posted by TomA1234

I think it is very good. I would suggest adding more emphasis on the muted notes, I didn't notice them first time I listened to it and they have a fairly strong role in the song.

I'll give it a go, thanks for the input

Edit: http://soundcloud.com/deadcarrot5/fu...umental-edit-2 Is that what you had in mind?