Critique my songs*

Steve! · #1 06-17-2009, 05:54 PM

I've been working hard on some new songs. I play the bass and keyboards and my friend played the guitar on them. Tell me what you think.

http://www.myspace.com/lilgscrib

Iv@N · #2 06-17-2009, 06:04 PM

They're pretty cool!
I enjoyed them

Steve! · #3 06-17-2009, 07:07 PM

thanks

Steve! · #4 06-17-2009, 07:43 PM

does anyone have some critisism?

JazzyLambert · #5 06-18-2009, 04:00 AM

I really enjoyed 'wasteland', very, very cool. Only criticism, the disorted guitar tone wasn't my favourite flavour.

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Steve! · #6 06-19-2009, 08:47 AM

thanks. any body else?

Barkless Dog · #7 06-19-2009, 09:09 AM

They sound like a nice start of something, but to me, sound kind of bland & one dimensional.

I think the songs could use more dynamic changes, or have a song go somewhere not just with the same feeling, level or drone over & over.

Just my opinion.

Steve! · #8 06-19-2009, 03:45 PM

Thank you for the constructive criticism!