Feedback Needed

[TFunkadelic]

http://soundcloud.com/snowybeats/backallyooze

I'd really like some thoughts on this instrumental track. Eventually it's going to have rap/spoken word lyrics over it, but I'd like some thoughts on it at this point. Specifically, is the time play too extreme?

Thanks as always.

[foq1978]

Cool. It would make a very interesting soundtrack for a movie, in my opinion.

[waleross]

If you doubled up the time it would sound so much better and should come alive. Maybe ?

[TFunkadelic]

Thanks guys. I think having vocals on it (and potentially some horn pads) will really fill it out a lot. I'll post back when it's finished.

[wicked_child]

adds some trumpets. like the ones on stevie wonder's superstitions