A few "recordings"

Depth_Charge · #1 09-03-2008, 09:33 AM

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm...ndid=396798954

I posted up some songs I wrote on bass, then finally transcribed into GuitarPro and exported to .mp3.

They're not great quality and there's no vocals, but I wouldn't mind some feedback all the same if anyone is willing...to me it's OK, but a little boring and maybe predictable.

Oh yeah please excuse the drum lines and guitar chord voicings, I don't play either instrument. And excuse the myspace page I haven't worked out how to make it look all pretty yet

Thanks.

Depth_Charge · #2 09-04-2008, 02:16 AM

Wow! are they that bad?

sensible68 · #3 09-04-2008, 05:00 AM

laughing at you - good driving bassline, would sound great with some crunchy metal guitar

phaser jam - stands up on its own pretty well

red cloud - I think the effects got in the way to an extent, there's a good melody in there, but not sure where it's going, starts a little indie (?) then ends up a bit prog

don't know why - love the dissonant bit, again it seems to mix styles, almost getting into a good heavy electronica vibe - go a bit more mental here sir.

grind - afraid this one didn't do a lot for me.

so, yeah - thanks for sharing! I thought the quality was pretty good.

what drum machine/software did you use?

sensible68 · #4 09-04-2008, 12:41 PM

for some reason I thought parts were a little like Pelican, maybe their tune Mammoth.

Depth_Charge · #5 09-06-2008, 01:13 AM

Hey thanks, it's always good to get feedback. I'm relieved it's ok at least.

I can't say I've heard of Pelican either. . .

I made those tracks in Guitar Pro 5, then exported them as .mp3's.

sensible68 · #6 09-06-2008, 01:25 AM

ah I see - I'm not familiar with guitar pro. cheers.