Very good song! I like the fact it's simple. They only thing that sounded a bit strange to me is the way the singer changed tone sometimes; I would prefer it if he kept it steady. Have you ever listened to Candlemass? If you have, you know what I mean (if I make any sense at all

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Your singer has a very nice voice, make sure you don't lose him

So, what bass were you using? It stands out very well.
When you upload more songs let us know, I really enjoyed it