First recording (cover)

[jesserr17]

i'm interested to see what people think of me and my brothers band.. and mostly r studio/recording, sound engineering ability
oh and my bass playing.. go easy only been playing a couple months

it's a sparta cover "cut your ribbon"

.. anyone got any ideas for the mix ?

http://www.tripclock.com/uploads/Tri...pclock-CYR.mp3


thx a lot

*edit- right click save target as

[Wrong Robot]

The whole thing sounds...raw, but it does sound very good.

I have never heard the original, so I can't really comment on the playing, It sounded good, some parts seemed kind of like the band fell apart a little.

turn up the bass!

the vocals could use some verb or something, maybe some compression on the drums.

[jesserr17]

hey thanks. their is a good bit of compression on allready .. but i guess a lot of raw sound for the drums comes through the room/cymbol mics .. voice has jus got some chorus,delay on it .. could add a bit of verb i guess... anyone have any other coments?

[IAMERICCOCHRANE]

Sounds good, although I can't hear the bass (turn it up man). Ive heard that song before, although I dont know who did it, and it sounds right on. All in all a good song. Keep it up.