First recording, looking for feedback

[xolado]

Hello everyone. I have been playing bass guitar for a year and a half, and most of this time I was learning new concepts and practicing as much as I could. Recently, I have recorded a song called "Great Times". It started out as an improvisation exercise I had created, but I really liked the sound of it so I didn't stop there. I recorded several tracks and put them on top of each other, and even tried to make some rhythm by popping the D string. I guess I could say this is the first song I made "on my own".

After hearing quite a few of the songs you guys share around here, I know that mine may not be that good, but I do like what I created and had good fun doing it and I was looking for some feedback from the "outside".

If you could tell me what you think about it, and of course how I could improve, I would be grateful.

Here it is: Great Times (Bass Guitar) - YouTube

Regards.

[S6I6X]

Hey man everyone starts somewhere. It sounds great. It's amazing what you can do with technology these days (and I'm only 23 saying that).

[xolado]

Thanks! Anyone else listened and can give feedback, please?

[HugeInJapan]

Nice and mellow. Sounds like you might have had the gain too high on the solo track? Something sounded like it was clipping.

[xolado]

Yes, maybe I did. The volume was probably too high.

It's funny how I only noticed when you told me. Thanks for that!