give advice on my recording!

[adube810]

http://h1.ripway.com/adube810/cissy%20strut.mp3
MIM p deluxe->BDDI->audio in macbook pro->garageband

i just learned cissy strut by the meters this morning, practicing with the metronome, then i decided to make a recording. i improvise in 2 sections of the recording so also note that (in the middle of the songs jam and the ending i jam out).

can anyone give me some helpful words?

[iNDiGLo]

through my laptop speakers i can barely hear the bass. the drums sound over powering. but it could just be my laptop.