www.myspace.com/daybreakdesire
Hi,
I am seeking basic feedback on my playing/bassline writing for the songs at the above URL (if you can pick out the basslines). The first and second were recorded DI with my jazz while the third was DI with my precision, all fingerstyle with fairly new roundwounds. The only effect I use is a fuzz pedal during the chorus of song 2. I'm on the edge about wether to just go clean for this entire song too. It was originally supposed to sort of heavy but kind of drifted away from that.
Any comments are appreciated, even if they are scathing. I don't have too terribly much experience, and I'm just looking to improve my playing/writing (most of the songs just get the bassline written in by me after the guitar parts), thanks.
