How is my improvising?

[bassnuzzle]

I recorded a cover of Snowblind by Black Sabbath (Geezer FTW) and I improvised the solo and the ending. I did make a few mistakes... buzzing and missing a few notes. And please no funny remarks about my hair I woke up an hour ago..

My Bad Cover of Snowblind - YouTube

[bassnuzzle]

Not good I take it...

[LanOsb133]

NOt bad ^.^ SOme obvious mistakes and BTW this wa smy firsttime hearing the song. SO i have no clue were the improve comes in. I think i have an idea. But its a little hard to tell for me at least... vv So i guess thats good and bad at the same time. Just my 2cents.

[stonedmotus]

not bad. keep practicing everyday & in a few weeks you should be able to blow that version away. keep listening to black sabbath!

[Stick_Player]

Cut the excess strings off, you're gonna put someone's eye out.