I need feedback!

[Ric Fish]

Originally Posted by godofthunder59

Seriously you don't need our input............................your doing fine all on your own.

Wow...thanks

[mcnach]

Originally Posted by Ric Fish

Okay TBers,
I need some serious feedback. This is my first bass solo I wrote and I'm curious to see what you guys have to say about it. I recorded it on my laptop using Audacity... I am aware the transitions are terrible, there's feedback, and I used a silly Audacity effect or two But all that aside...I would like to know what you think of the song itself. Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/abdomain/abby-bass-solo-mp3-1

I like the vibe but I feel over 5 minutes is pushing it. You need to either shorten it, or come up with more interesting ideas.

Better to have a cool but short piece that leaves people feeling they could listen to more of it, than one too long that makes people bored.

[Ric Fish]

Originally Posted by mcnach

I like the vibe but I feel over 5 minutes is pushing it. You need to either shorten it, or come up with more interesting ideas.

Better to have a cool but short piece that leaves people feeling they could listen to more of it, than one too long that makes people bored.

I understand. This was my first one and I have since condensed my ideas. I know what you mean about getting bored...I appreciate your honesty.

[lfmn16]

Free your mind and you ass will follow - Funkadelic.

It's nice to hear someone thinking and playing outside the box. Watch out for the Root/5th police though; you're liable to get a ticket.

[Ric Fish]

Originally Posted by lfmn16

Free your mind and you ass will follow - Funkadelic.

It's nice to hear someone thinking and playing outside the box. Watch out for the Root/5th police though; you're liable to get a ticket.

Yikes...I DO love my root/5th...and octaves <3 haha, I always find myself using them but hopefully now that it's been brought to my attention I can branch away more often :P

[Ric Fish]

Strange or cool?

http://m.soundcloud.com/abdomain/wel...-i-have-to-say

[hairy_walnut]

Originally Posted by Ric Fish

Strange or cool?

http://m.soundcloud.com/abdomain/wel...-i-have-to-say

Bit of both. The way I like it.

[Ric Fish]

https://soundcloud.com/abdomain/armadillo-vs-anteater

Give that one a listen please. And thank you