I need some pointers

[Muusers]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jUFKladArzM

What do you think? Where can I improve a lot?

[Steve]

I didn't really see anything in there that needed to be improved "a lot".

It looked like the third and fourth fingers on your left hand were a little stiff...uncomfortable...weak maybe but, it didn't seem to be having any negative impact on your ability to get the job done which, you did nicely.

[Muusers]

Yeah, my pinkie is still a little weak, but that'll come with practising.

[Dave-Action-Fig]

Tuning! The E string is way out of tune.
You need to find rest in your left hand. Do a lot of chromatic ex.