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Originally Posted by ebladeboi123 Anyway band flaws, any song flaws (we will probably only play one song off that demo at the show), and just general comments are appreciated. I know i posted it before (i think), but I'm going to give it another shot.
Any feedback is nice (yes i know my playing is phenomial, but I feel it's what the songs called for). |
Well you guys are definitely tight!
That said, I don't know how tough it's fair to be but I felt that for me the weaker links that could be improved upon would be lyrics, singing approach and especially the solo on the first track.
The singer has a nice voice but it really sounds like he's trying hard to think of what he wants to sound like and probably would do better just to think about the lyrics.
Focus on the song, forget the listeners.
The lyrics need help but if I could tell you how to fix them I'd probably be doing clinics on songwriting.
Incidentally one of your statements that makes me want to be critical is your personal asessment of yourself as phenomenal.
Confidence is a good thing, but so is humility and I heard nothing there that would have made me think of term phenomenal.
You guys all have the potential to make your lives with music and I have no doubt that at least a couple of you will, so try to glean what you can from this post and ignore the rest.
Well that's my 2￠ worth, if it's worth that much!
That is exactly the style of music I like and for your age you are great. I dont have to much complaints, although the lead guitarists tone was a bit weak imo. 
