| I don't have a ton of time because I'm at work, but I will listen more tonight. The only thing i can mention is how the vocals sit in the music. They need some reverb, and there needs to be some eqing so they stick out a little more, and maybe a little to make them less harsh on some of the tracks. The first track the vocals are pretty quiet compared to the guitar, so its like im listening to the guitar, and the vocals are in the background, and you probably want to flip that.
As for the music, i will write more later when i can sit down and listen, as im an avid metal fan. | 
