Listen to this song

[Squice]

Can you please listen to this song and comment both on my
Bass playing and sound.
This is not my song, I just played the bass for them.
And also this kinda my first studio work so any comment would be nice.

http://www.mmedia.is/hsg/brak/files/bluevelvet.mp3

With my best regards...

[AcousTronic]

Well since it is not your song, I don't mind telling you that it is sort of boring... The bass playing is great, as well as the overall sound. But what is that constant ticking? Is it a Taborine? If it is, the Taborine player needs to relax once in a while, or just play where there is not a mic turned on... Let me guess, it's the singer's girlfriend?

[bassicinstinct]

I agree with AcousTronic, except that I have no idea what a "taborine" is, so I have no way of knowing if I can hear one.

[Squice]

yeb.. it´s the singer´s girlfriend hehehe.....

I think that those tick are supposed to be rimshots. (hitting the rim of the snare)

and also we didn´t have a drummer. so they are just made in protools.. live samples...

But thanks for the complements on my playing. Nice to hear other peoples opinions. always nice to know if your doing something right or wrong.

ps. the bass was just plugged straight into protools.

Best regards.