Listen to teh suckness

[Freaky Fender]

I just put up some of my songs, and I want feedback. Any. Good and Bad. a 5 page essay, or just a simple phrase. And Thanks for listening to it.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/ha...rtleymusic.htm

[superbassman2000]

i like the aeroplane song and the smoothie song, is that your tip-of-the-hat to nickel creek?

all bad jokes aside, i liked those two, the guitar work on the other songs were alright, not great, kinda reminded me of deftones for guitars, liked the bass and drums too, especially the bass on the first song (of which i have already forgotten the name)


Charlie

[Benjamin Strange]

Originally Posted by superbassman2000

i like the aeroplane song and the smoothie song, is that your tip-of-the-hat to nickel creek?

all bad jokes aside, i liked those two, the guitar work on the other songs were alright, not great, kinda reminded me of deftones for guitars, liked the bass and drums too, especially the bass on the first song (of which i have already forgotten the name)


Charlie

Heh... I played bass on that first track. It's a little out of tune and sloppy, but that's what you get for a first take.

[Benjamin Strange]

By the way, I like the Universal Mistake song. That's cool.

[Whafrodamus]

Tell the geetar player to work on his tuning. Other than that, you got some good stuff there.

[Freaky Fender]

I AM the geetar player. Anyway. Yeah, they're out of tune sometimes.

[Timbo]

All the stars sounds way cool.

[Freaky Fender]

Thanks man. Smoothie I think is my best. Unfortunitly I can't remember how to play it. I know it's in a D-A-D-Gb-A-D tuning, or something like that. I just don't remember what messed up chords I used for it.

Please, people, give me some more feedback! Be honest!

[Mon Rominee]

Interesting. Just listen to the drum machine more, or don't use it.