I really dug the track - your ideas are cool , the bass sounds great and your playing was spot on - the only negative I can point out is the slight peaking in the low notes; you might want to remix it a little and pull the gain / EQ down a little as those lovely low notes are distorting - it's just a technical thing and the only thing that detracted from the overall tune - good work otherwise and I'm sure you can fix that thing.
