A little recording project. I'd like your thoughts!

[TFunkadelic]

http://soundcloud.com/tfunkp/fall-vapors

I've been trying to learn to program/record in logic lately and this is the project I've been doing it with. I played everything on here.

If you've got a minute to listen to it I'd like to hear your thoughts, positive and negative.

[flypejose]

You are on your way to becoming an excellent arranger/producer! The way each instrument is played (or programed) is consistent with the general mood of the tune.
What bass are you playing by the way?

If you're able to improvise on top of that and afford some professional mixing and mastering...this would be a winner!

[Reynoldbot]

Yeah this and the other tracks sound very tight, very professional. I might say they are a little too clinical, or too perfect sounding. But as far as criticisms go, that ain't too bad. I'm a fan of kind of gritty, grungy sounding recordings anyway, so take that how you want.

[TFunkadelic]

Thanks for the input guys, greatly appreciated!

Originally Posted by flypejose

You are on your way to becoming an excellent arranger/producer! The way each instrument is played (or programed) is consistent with the general mood of the tune.
What bass are you playing by the way?

It's a 1991 Modulus Quantum 5 string. It's quite far from it's stock configuration but if you'd like to know more about it I'd be happy to answer any questions.

[Deesack]

I'm digging it. Could try another version maybe a bit faster tempo? It seemed a bit too slow but maybe that's just me?