A little (well.. not that little really..) song by me..

jokke_v · #1 01-31-2005, 12:24 PM

So... I recorded this a while ago, and I've been thinking of ways to improve it, but I haven't really come to a conclution yet.

The style of the song is probably something in the lines of progressive metal. Listen and judge by yourselves.

I play both the guitar and bass on this, and the drums and piano are sequenced.

This is more of a scetch kind of, so the quality could be better.

What I want really is just some comments on what to improve, and how you like the song!

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=472634&T=3341

Osama_Spears · #2 01-31-2005, 01:12 PM

Sounds like a guitarist wrote this track...Why is the bass hard to hear?

EDIT: Now its more clear,and pronounced.

quite the song...

**Adam Barkley** · #3 01-31-2005, 04:03 PM

I dig.

jokke_v · #4 02-01-2005, 03:16 PM

Thank's for listening people.