Howdy all,
I (31, guitarist, bassist from The Netherlands originally) have been a member for a while here years ago, but couldn't find my login stuff back. So I made a new account. Recently I moved to Rockville MD and I met a drummer, Mike. After jamming out some stuff I had an idea of a song laying on the bookshelve. We haven't been able to find a vocalist yet, but this instrumental part came out of it. I play bass and guitar on it. Now it seems that we have to leave the US in two weeks, this is a bit of souvenir... but is it worth it?
Here's a soundcloud track (couldn't get it embedded)
http://soundcloud.com/drteng/paradise
In contrast to what I mostly did (playing too much notes, as well on bass and guitar) I tried to be sparse with notes and make sure the essence is played with only a few tasty ones. Also the solo at the end is meant that way.
I'd like to have feedback on the overall composition, technique, style, sound.. (and the slight rhythm fluctuations will be solved soon).. so shoot away (but don't kill me
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Thanks!
Mayer/Police style studio recording 
