I mean, it's good and everything for the style it's in, but I find it a bit uninspiring. Maybe you should branch out a bit in your sound? Huge potential there, and I'd love to see what else you come up with! Keep working at it!
P.S. Props on the bass line, it didn't sound like it was just following the guitars the entire time, which is pretty impressive considering the junk bass players use usually in this style.
