more bass music

[Correlli]

Just a sample of a coupla pieces I've been playing around with. Mixdown 1 uses a hip hop beat which I quite like. Mixdown 2 has two bass guitar tracks, 1 clean and the other overdriven.

Mixdown 1


Mixdown 2

[Whafrodamus]

The first song, the time is iffy in some spots. The song is incredibly repetitive and lacks substance.. I do dig when the organ comes in, but that's for 2-3 seconds.

The second song has a similar problem. It lacks.. uhh.. stuff. It's empty.

[Llama's Rage]

minus the time issues, i thought the second song was pretty groovy

[Correlli]

Originally Posted by Llama's Rage

minus the time issues, i thought the second song was pretty groovy

cheers

[i like tictacs]

They both lack direction, but they could be good.

[Correlli]

Originally Posted by i like tictacs

They both lack direction, but they could be good.

what do you mean by lack direction?

[i like tictacs]

They don't go anywhere, or resolve. There is nothing to look forward to, no build up.

[Correlli]

Originally Posted by i like tictacs

They don't go anywhere, or resolve. There is nothing to look forward to, no build up.

resolve to...


can you give an example please.

[Whafrodamus]

Originally Posted by Kiwi Kid

resolve to...


can you give an example please.

Climax, resolution, all that good stuff which makes music interesting falls into the general category of "stuff". I'm not trying to make any personal attack, so just chill with the PM's. Songs are like pie, man. You don't want a pie packed with every kind of filling imaginable so it is simply saturated with everything, but then again.. you don't want yourself a pie that's just a crust. You're more on the crusty end. Just fill it with a melody, or just something to actually listen to. Even words, movie quotes, emo poetry, klingon opera.. You choose. Just fill your pie, man. Jesus, I"m hungry.