Mp3 inside ( Derby bay By The Dman Derek )

[Bluez Dawg]

Can you guys tell me if I need to work on my timign a bit?

I've been working with my timing a lot this week & last week.

http://webpages.charter.net/derrek/testtrack1.mp3

Thanks Derek.

[Masher88]

Lose all the effects. You can barely hear what is going on because it's all drowned out.

[pretaanluxis]

bad recording quality there
I'm not familiar with the song so I can't help

[Bluez Dawg]

Thanks all. The song is somethign I came up with when I was freestyling. and please forgive the bad recordings untill a few months.