| that's dam good for a first recording, my first wasn't near as good.
Interesting song. all the instrumentation sounded good. Was it a quickie recording at a studio? or part of a larger project? or done at home?
my only critique, (I know you didn't ask for it), would be that that it seemed a bit rushed.
the singing melody was interesting and he had some catchy lyrics, if it was just a little more laid back so those could come out more I think it would really help the tune.
Remember sure people like guitar and bass and drums, but it's really all about the song, people gotta hear and get at least the chorus of your song. that kinda equals making sure the vocal is heard easily and remembered. |