Hah, neat stuff - gotta love a track that fits that many different riffs in under 3 minutes. I'm listening to a lot of Underoath and Norma Jean at the moment, I love all the jarring guitar *glonks* and *skreeks*.
Bass tone cuts riiiight through, and that's all we care about here
Looking at the visual side: One thing man, when performing - hair out, no tail. I've been guilty of that when I had long hair, until a barmaid mistook me for the soundguy. Then I realised, they ALL HAVE PONYTAILS. Scary, it's like a sacred brotherhood of half-deaf old rockers.
The other thing is that it looks like you were the only one that didn't get the black shirt memo
A visually cohesive band looks better IMO. In Lifeless Alarm we pick a colour theme for the gig - usually red or white + black - and wear what we want based around those colours.
