My DarkAmbient/Electronic Project, first track, Opinions ?

[TheButler]

I have finally completed the rough 'draft' track of my new ''Dark Ambient'' project. It is nothing too fancy on the scale of things but i hope i am on the right tracks with it. I can't really go into much more detail or i will be here for a AGES but if you have any specific questions i'll do my best to answer them

Please have the patience to hear the track out it does evolve throughout. I appreciate constructive criticisms but please bear in mind i am new to this game so try not to cut me down too harshly

I hope to get the final edition of the track complete relatively soon I don't want to rush it too much. Anyhow, here is what i have so far

http://boomp3.com/m/e3596b08f854

It should just play when you open it ...

[Sonic_Death]

This is a pretty good track. It has a good feel to it, keeps a decent pace throughout, and considering you are just new to doing this kind of thing, I enjoy it.

Keep it up dude!

[drwhiteguy]

Im feelin it....

[TheButler]

That is the main thing i hoped for, someone that ''felt'' it I suppose it is an aquired taste and it really isn't the best example of my ability (which isn't all that great yet). I appreciate everyone else that has taken the time to listen to it, albeit not give any feedback