Well I think both songs need to be fleshed out a little better.
The spoken word sections (at each minute end of on the Paris song) are probably the things that I liked the most. Also, after the intro and before the outro of the Loop song, I was digging it.
One major critique is long vibratos are overdone and actually took away from both songs.
Keep in mind that it is rare that I find a bass oriented piece that I truly enjoy. So take my opinion with a grain of salt.
Peace,
Adam
