My old metal band

[trasser]

Hi guys.

About 6 months ago, I recorded a little demo with my metal band. The demo hasn't been released yet, due to band conflicts and the fact that it is extremely difficult though necessary to apply for copyright here in Denmark. Extremely annoying.
Anyhow, if you could find the time, I'd like to get some feedback on one of our songs. Please check www.myspace.com/thebaptizer - the song shoud upload by itself. I must state, that it is NOT my myspace-site, but our very neurotic lead singer.
Any feedback would be nice, please listen to the whole tune, the ending is where most of the bass is going down. Thanks.
PS. I did it in one take I know its not a very difficult song to play, never the less, I'm proud.

[trasser]

None at all?

[TyronPotamkin]

if the song was pond of love it was an aliright song. I think it needs a little bit more depth from all the players whether it be effect added to the sound or more intricacy(sp) from all players. the vocals on the other hand need to go in my opinion but I also dont like vocals like that. here's a link to our myspace. The vocals were cut 2 weeks after we got our singer who had never sang in a band of any kind before this.
http://www.myspace.com/smokewhiskeyband
you will need to click on the song to listen to it. these are also really compressed as well so they may sound a little thin.