My Two Attempts at Making and Recording Songs
 

I did these two on my computer using Live Lite 7.
The guitar parts are the only things I actually recorded.
The rest of the instruments and sounds were written, played and mixed into the tracks using the program.

I was going for kind of atmospheric sounds in these.
In the first one I was trying to make it heavier (read: too much double kick).
And the second one, a little more laid back.

http://youtu.be/w1UiLgm-Mn4

http://youtu.be/3qzWn6kT76U

If I were to redo the first one, I would do some things different, including fix the intro and ending. (And use less kick!)
The second one I just finished up last night.

I'm just looking for some opinions and tips. This is just a hobby for me; just some fun on the side!
And I don't mind brutal honesty...

(Song titles of bears and sharks of no relation to:
http://www.homestarrunner.com/sbemail145.html)

:p

Are they that bad?
:D