on my way towards groovin'?

[natselection]

Hey i'm new to the whole..slap groovin' scene...so i made up a skelatal structure for some sort of groove that i hope will form into a full groove...but am i on the right track?

picture a RHCP rockin' drum beat behind this =P

http://www.imgdump.net/other/riff1.wav

i started slapping mayb last year when i was 14 so its not THAT great in terms of technique i suppose (my ryhtms are somehwat limited for this riff)...i heard some crazy stuff on the internet

[d8g3jdh]

Very nice! Refined. I like it.

[morf]

Cool stuff, especially if you're only 15. Try to practice Aeroplane by RHCP, the slap part is alot of fun

[natselection]

i tried to learn aeroplane (not by tabs..of course!) but the bass dips down on a certain part in my recording...i'll have to play with the eq on my ipod a bit