NEED FEEDBACK - Track needs a listen

DraVenSF · #1 03-30-2006, 11:15 PM

I need feedback from as much people possible

Reason being, I need to know if I'm doing alright or just plain suck and should take lessons ha

I got a new track posted up on myspace. It's my first track made through Logic Pro 7.0.1. I'm a one man band. I played the guitar, bass, sang, and programmed the drums myself so if it sucks...that might be the reason why since its my first try really...

Thanks in advance for taking the time to listen.

heres the address:
www.myspace.com/arcanefix

by the way, if you have myspace yourself feel free to add me

liquid-dream-ex · #2 03-31-2006, 02:03 AM

Sound VERY VERY much like Incubus. (esp. like the song "neither of us can see" .. or as it admiration? one of those two)

The Intro is too long - bring in the vocals earlier. The drums sound actually pretty good.

I', now 1:30 into the song - it get's boring, how about a different part somewhere.

Very nice Voice, good guitar sound, the bass sounds a little weak.