| the drums are undermixed, the guitar is overmixed and the bass is too boomy on the low end
I would remix, start with the drums, get them solid and base every thing around them. The bass needs some low end to be cut you can experiment from 100-250 K or so, the guitars are bit too woofy in the lows as well which just muddys things up
from a performance aspect you need to watch the unintonnated bends on the guitar, get that down. Bend up a half whole, minor 3rd etc with vibrato and then just hammer on to that note to make sure you were not sharp or flat to check yourself, this need to be instinctive. When you come to the not at the end of a run, nail it.
the cross picking in the 2nd tune is also pretty loose, you would be better off strumming an octave slide for that chromatic run, the guitar tone is shrill on the top end, warm it up on the top
keep at it - they are both workable ideas. |