New Song ( chill vibe , need feedback )

[bassAddict05]

what up everyone,

caught the flu, it can't keep me down though! haha. came up with a little song, called ' painful approach ' . Let me know what you all think
http://www.myspace.com/citizenpolak

ps

the album is almost complete. working on cover for the album, and order of the tracks and about 1 more track should do it, thanks for all the support in the making.

[tumpinjahosafat]

i like your stuff man. Its pretty cool. I think your music would profit dramatically if you beefed up the drums and made them more interesting, the way they are right now makes me feel like its got the emo-ish post rock thing goin on, but i can tell your not going for that. Also some really cool guitar licks going on there, but i think you should play them with more intensity, i feel they deserve it. Otherwise, your music is really cool consider me a fan.

[bassAddict05]

Originally Posted by tumpinjahosafat

i like your stuff man. Its pretty cool. I think your music would profit dramatically if you beefed up the drums and made them more interesting, the way they are right now makes me feel like its got the emo-ish post rock thing goin on, but i can tell your not going for that. Also some really cool guitar licks going on there, but i think you should play them with more intensity, i feel they deserve it. Otherwise, your music is really cool consider me a fan.

cool man, good to know. i appreciate you taking the time to check it out, I will def consider all that.

[Matt Till]

I will back the drum comments: I don't think the guitar needs to be played with any more intensity, I don't think intense is what you are going for, so I think a laid back approach is more appropriate.

But back to the drums, I think if before the album was released you scrapped (almost) all of the fake drums and got a real drummer to sit in, it would be such an improvement to your music. I think that's the only thing that prevents your music from sounding really pro and like something I'd want to hear live.