New Song.. laid back ( ideal conviction ) Need feedback...

[bassAddict05]

what up eveyone..

new song out put out right now
called 'ideal conviction'

def went for that laid back feel.

check it out and let me know what you all think,
I appreciate all the feedback like always

http://www.myspace.com/citizenpolak

-Citizen Polak

[xtorrak]

I like it, I wish there was more bass and more aggressive distortion. Right around ~49seconds is where it gets interesting. I almost turned it off because of the repetitiveness prior to the 49second mark, I don't know what that means for you.

Nice work.

[bassAddict05]

Originally Posted by xtorrak

I like it, I wish there was more bass and more aggressive distortion. Right around ~49seconds is where it gets interesting. I almost turned it off because of the repetitiveness prior to the 49second mark, I don't know what that means for you.

Nice work.

thanks for checking it out man.

what that means to me is that ... it was repetitive to you haha.
What I was going for is to just loose yourself in that opening riff.Its like a setup for the song. Thats why it ends the same.