New song needs critique

darkfinger · #1 01-31-2008, 11:28 PM

Hey all,

I just posted a new track that we just finished the rough mix on.
The song is called Loving The Breakdown. I would love to hear any comments/criticisms that anyone might have.

www.myspace.com/theviberiders is where you find the track.

Thanks Guys!

bassaficionado6 · #2 02-01-2008, 12:41 AM

Very mellow...

lambro · #3 02-02-2008, 08:39 AM

did you take a sample from Shuggy Ottis on the 2nd tune? the dec mix

reminds me of SF lounge for the early evening, decent chill

agreatheight · #4 02-02-2008, 08:46 AM

Nice groove - very loose - and nice lo-fi production.

If I had any suggestions it would be that the vocal doubling is a bit distracting - but tighter performance by the singer should fix that. Vocals could also be louder / more compressed to sound more even and more present.

Nice track though. Thumbs up!

darkfinger · #5 02-02-2008, 02:31 PM

hey guys,

lambro, no samples...it was all original...I hope!

agreatheigh, Thanks, for the kind words... I totally agree on the vocal critique.

I`m thinking that everything needs to be fattened up a bit. And it sounds a little empty in spots to me... but that could just be because I`m too close to the project.

keep any other advice/criticisms coming!

Cheers