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12-13-2007, 03:18 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Seattle | | | NEW SONG of NEW ALBUM! ( best produced YET, in my opinion)
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Woooo, so last night I was making this song till about 4 am. and bam it came out nice I think. My best produced song yet in my opinion.Now I messed with the drums so its not he same over and over,theres change! woo! haha. This is for the new album , so this is the first track , its called " a reccuring lesson (that everyone timed hourly) http://www.myspace.com/citizenpolak
check it out , and let me know what you all think
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12-14-2007, 06:57 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Auckland, NZ | | | Improving with every new track.
Good work mate. |
12-14-2007, 07:04 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: fontana,CA | | | top notch as always.. my ipod cant get enough haha
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12-16-2007, 12:38 AM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Seattle | | | thanks to the both of you |
12-16-2007, 07:46 AM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Edinboro, PA | | | Well composed songs. My initial reaction was that it need vocals... but then I listened more, I think the music is active enough to maintain interest as a instrumental band. It would be really cool if you could turn this into a live thing because thinking about it more, the thing that would truly make this an instrumental band worth seeing live: REAL drums.
You did program some good drums, but a live drummer adding his 2 cents would make this a band I'd like to see live. The interaction between the guitar and bass is great.
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12-16-2007, 08:35 AM
| | | | I like it a lot, and I agree with the live band comment. Ever heard of the band Ratatat?
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12-16-2007, 08:43 AM
| | | | Great Job, those are good loop drums, but definately find a real drummer, there is nothing like jamming with PEOPLE! Great job though.
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12-16-2007, 08:59 AM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Rockville, MD | | | It's pretty cool but I'm not a fan of "dance rock" drums. Adding a real drummer could take this song to a whole new level. I would change the ending a little too.
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12-16-2007, 10:01 AM
|  | I'm a tumbler, born under punches | | Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Northern California | | | I've been listening to your stuff for a few days now. I really dig it. You have a very interesting sense of counter melody. The different layered guitar and bass parts play off each other very well and give what at times seems to be a static groove a real sense of movement.
I'd echo the sentiment that this stuff would sound great fleshed out by a full band, with a drummer and likely two guitarists. I'd also wager that minimalist vocals could also add a welcome dimension to your songs. They could fade in and out, like in dub or house songs. Or they could almost perform like another instrument similar to Thom Yorke did on the Kid A album.
But all of that's not to say the songs aren't really good as they are. Keep up the good work.
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12-16-2007, 10:06 AM
|  | Registered User | | Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Long Island, NY | | | Cool stuff. Very interesting and intelligent!
I agree with the "find a drummer" comment, though - a real person on drums would open up the feel for you!
Good work!
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12-16-2007, 02:33 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Seattle | | | What up,
thanks for all the constructive critisism from everyone. Yea I mean eventually, If i were to do this live, Id get a fulltime drummer and 2 guitarists for sure, thats already planned out. I mean ive jammed iwth many many people, drummers , guitarist, sax, everythign but no one around here is not experimental music lately, once it comes along though, ill be sure to make this stuff and play LIve. Anyways I do know of the band RATATAT. Actaully found out about them couple weeks ago when somebody else mentioned them haha, and I really do dig them. But yea thanks again | | Thread Tools | Search this Thread | | | | 
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