| Excellent tune, far better then much of the stuff posed here. A few quick suggestions #1 Singer needs to ennunciate the lyrics better, people need to be able to get a line of vocals in there head. #2 Try to leave some more space durring the quiter parts with the bass, and maybe play more counter point in your lines, when the guitar goes down you might go up instead of mirroring his picked bass lines. If you were to come in for instance in the middle of a verse, people would miss the bass and you could create more tension, I loved your playing durring the heavier parts, tasty. All in All the muscianship was high quality and the song was moving emotionally and harmonicly, just a few Ideas, my takes, not necesscarily the gospel.
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