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Old 07-18-2005, 03:08 AM
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Here's a track with my current group Comedia del Arte. If you could please tell me what you find *wrong* with it I would appreciate it greatly. Any constructive criticism, considering it's an out there group would be helpful. Thanks.

http://www.angelfire.com/mac/forlife/Sheik_Dharma.mp3

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Old 07-22-2005, 12:44 AM
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Bump. Honestly looking for criticism, as I feel most tracks are standard and not too different. My group puts out some crazy harmonies in jams and I would like some good musicians input as to what they think from this track.
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Old 07-22-2005, 02:01 AM
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Angelfire apparently doesn't like hotlinking, so you gotta jump through a hoop or two to dl the file.

I thought it sounded good, and I think it'll sound better as the band gets more polished while also going for more "out there" stuff. If you personally think it sounds too standard, then you should take that as a positive sign to keep running farther with it creatively.
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Old 07-23-2005, 12:47 AM
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Right right. Getting "out there", really, would be quoting bird off time against a six-eight arfican beat and djembe.

Jobs. Money. Girls. Do the true musicians somehow avoid these pitfalls?

The more I develop, the more I will stretch.
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Old 07-23-2005, 01:31 AM
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Hey, if you don't want your jobs, money, or girls, feel free to send them my way.
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I don't care about the jobs or money. Just send the girls.
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