Please Review my new Song!!!

[Palomorado]

Give my new song a spin and let me know twhat you think.

Lots and lots of bass tracks on this one ranging from fretless to Alembic, to Fender Jazz, with some Wooly Mammoth and Machine thrown in from time to time.

Any and all comments on writing, performance, and production would be greta:

http://home.earthlink.net/~airdhyde/.../dromidary.mp3

[Papersen]

I dig it.
Your bass tone is ok. Really good in the intro and the next part. The production is also good. I´m going through the mixing process with my band and your results are fine (better than ours for sure).
The vocalist has a nice voice, but I personally don´t enjoy the way she sings (just a matter of personal preference).

[Sonic_Death]

I really enjoyed listening to this song. I thought that everything was fine except for the vocalist getting a bit out of hand at times. I agree with Papersen in that she has a nice voice, but she must learn to control it a bit more. With that aside it was a good song though.

[Palomorado]

Originally Posted by Sonic_Death

I really enjoyed listening to this song. I thought that everything was fine except for the vocalist getting a bit out of hand at times. I agree with Papersen in that she has a nice voice, but she must learn to control it a bit more. With that aside it was a good song though.

you should have heard her before i started the "taming" process.
i'm working on her....

thanks for the words...keep 'em coming!!!

[Malodorous]

Vocals were very irritating, other than that it sounds good.

[workdaddy]

vocalist is great, i like it. a little flat a times. i like the bass tone!! snare should come down in the mix. my .02

[Aaron Saunders]

Originally Posted by Palomorado

you should have heard her before i started the "taming" process.
i'm working on her....

thanks for the words...keep 'em coming!!!

Keep working.

The music is great, the vocals...need work.

[Erlendur Már]

I like it.