I really liked the background noise. The guitar & bass were good as well, but the song or piece did not seem to go anywhere, just kind of stayed in the same vein for the whole song.
I think it needed to build or have a change to break up the monotony. Maybe just bringing something down in the mix or slowly building everything. Or cutting everything out except the background then hit it with the guitar then add the bass slowly in the mix.
I can dig what Barkless is sayin'. Plus, you know I cant do bong hits here at the office ! ( I dont condone drug use kidz!)
Its cool. You have ALOT of room to add more bass. I'm hearing 1/8 and 1/16th notes paradiddles in there, not just 1/4 plucks. I think some "rustling" would add to the texture of the song. Higher register stuff, not down low. But that my ears.
Cool!
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