Rate My New Song (relaxing, easy listening)

[bassAddict05]

what up everyone,

been about 2 weeks I guess?
been busy with looking for new jobs and all that good stuff
anyways I put together a nice little piece called 'open your eyes'

dedicated to the people that need to open their eyes to the world
to themselves
to reality
to everything around them
all feedback welcome

http://www.myspace.com/citizenpolak

enjoy!

[Valerus]

nice work man! I liked it.

[The_Robster]

I like it its way chill

[MonetBass]

It is interesting and not too busy, which is a good thing. However (and I had this same problem with some of my earlier instrumental compositions) it is lacking something melodic to grab hold of. I dig it though!

[bassAddict05]

thanks for the feedback. much appreciated as always.