recorded song with my daughter

[locriansharpsec]

hey TBers Im pretty new to recording and am using Reaper software trying to get the hang of it.
My daughter wrote this song a few days ago and we recorded it over the next few days. She is singing and playing the guitars and Im playing the bass. I was hoping to get some feedback on the song, mix etc. and any pointers that will help make it better.
Im real proud of her! Thanks for any comments!
Be Happy - YouTube

[screaminglucy]

the string squeak is distracting but it sounds great!

[locriansharpsec]

Thanks Lucy! Not sure how to fix the squeak without redoing it but I will look to see what can be done.

[jsteez]

Work on the drums, currently they sound to repetitive, and there's no fills. Mix-wise, turn up the guitar and bass a little you can't really hear them as well as the prominent drums. The song is good written, but dynamically could use a bit of difference. Vocals sound good, maybe raise volume a bit more during parts though.