hey! don't be too insulted by the amount of responses you get on this. my experience is talkbassers don't listen to much of each other's recordings. me included, that's why I'm making an extra effort these days to do so.
hopefully constructive criticism:
I liked it when it was heartfelt and sounded connected and melodic. At the points where it seems yer just showin what your fingers can do it looses it for me. I like to focus more on being solid and in the pocket than on plalying lots of notes that don't sound as musical.
Good stuff otherwise though. I liked it for the most part.
edit. just checked your profile and saw that you're 15.
THAT WAS SMOKIN!!!!!!

Keep doin whatever you're doin!