interesting tune, but you gotta tighten up that bass drum. it also sounds kind of clogged in the upper register (clarinety sound & guitar are occupying the same space at times and are both kind of busy...so the sound is rather saturated).
not sure if this is just a recording for fun or for eventual release, but overall the most important thing to getting a great recording is getting a great performance from all the musicians and there are some sloppy performances at times. but that's just my ears...and what do i know?
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