Here is some feedback, I don't think all that many people reply in this particular forum unless its about Rocco Prestia or someone famous.
First track:
I like the first repeated riff its nice and melodic. I think in the middle It kinda wanders off to less sure territories. Maybe a little more melodic structure would help? Maybe some lower notes for a little variation. I Like the riff when it comes in at about 1 minute. Also like the chordal stuff towards the end. I guess maybe some more dynamics ( even though this seems like it should stay a bit on the quite side because of the style)
Second track:
Like the mood. Again maybe some more dynamics would help. You are choosing some nice chords. Don't be afraid to bring back themes you have played before, people like hearing a cool riff come back.
Overall:
Good work. You obviously are going for a melodic vibe on the bass which I can certainly understand. I like the moods you are setting, and you are doing some nice chords, especially for just starting out a little over a year ago. I would say keep doing that and maybe add some energy and or dynamics to the music to make the moody stuff come out even more.
Cheers
Chris
P.S. I also recently put up some stuff. Let me know what you think.
A Vid of some melodic Warr guitar
) on me, i need the criticism.
